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Aside from your work, what are the things that will make you "on-the-go"?

김지혜/2024-05-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Parenting and housework make me ob-the-go. I came back home, I will make the dinner for my family. Then I help my sons's difficult study. My husband works laundry, clean the home and washes dishes. We have rest time after sons sleep, but I know this moment valuble time with my family.
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Wis!
Thank you for this! Salute to your husband who helps you with house chores. I heard that husbands of this generation are helping their wives. Enjoy your moment together. When tasks are shared by many they become easy:)
T. Aki~

Parenting and housework make me on the go.
>>>  CORRECT!

I came back home, I will make the dinner for my family. Then I help my sons's difficult study.
>>> Every time I come home, I have to make dinner for my family and then help my sons with difficult school subjects.

My husband works laundry, clean the home and washes dishes.
>>> My husband does the laundry, cleans our house, and wash the dishes.

We have rest time after sons sleep, but I know this moment valuble time with my family.
>>>> We have rest time after our children sleep, but I know this moment is valuable time with my family.
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