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When someone invites you to a birthday, do you go there one time?

박준현/2024-05-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Of corse I will go there one time. If who will invites me, I will go faster. And I will invites many friends in my party. Do you go there at one time? These are the reasons why I will not late if friends invites me in the birthday party.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille



Of corse I will go there one time.
>> Of course I will go there one time.
If who will invites me, I will go faster.
>> Whoever invites me, I will go there fast.
And I will invites many friends in my party.
>> And, I will invite many friends at my party.
Do you go there at one time?
>> Do you go there on time?
These are the reasons why I will not late if friends invites me in the birthday party.
>> These are the reasons why I will not be late if friends invite me to their birthday party.

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