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김순님/2024-05-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think tradional holidays are not my holidays. It is defined as traveling with friends or lovers. In the future, I would remember my memorable holidays and feel happy.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Sunny!
The way you understand "holiday" is considered a verb. Where you will go on a trip with people whom you love.
Example: She is holidaying in Bali, Indonesia,
             : She went on a holiday in Indonesia
But when we use holiday/s as a noun, it is a specified time when people do not go for work.
Example:  The holiday was long, so she went holidaying in Bali, Indonesia.
Thank you for this!
Aki~

I think traditional holidays are not my holidays.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I guess traditional holidays are not holidays for me.
 
It is defined as traveling with friends or lovers.
>>> I define it as traveling with friends or loved ones.

In the future, I would remember my memorable holidays and feel happy.
>> In the future, I will remember my memorable holidays and feel happy.
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