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What kind of bedroom would you want to have at your age? Describe it.

차진혁/2024-05-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want night theme bedroom or the Middle Age theme bedroom. In night theme, I want to twinkle stars and shine the moon. In the Middle Age theme, I want to many flags and castle.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good Thursday evening, Jimmy!

Here's your revised homework. Please go through the corrections, such as "twinkling stars" vs "twinkle stars". Have a good one!


Cheers,
Jean~~




                      What kind of bedroom would you want to have at your age? Describe it.



I want night theme bedroom or the Middle Age theme bedroom.
>> I want a night-theme bedroom or the Middle Ages theme bedroom.

In night theme, I want to twinkle stars and shine the moon.
>> For the night theme, I want twinkling stars and shining moon. 

In the Middle Age theme, I want to many flags and castle.
>> For the Middle Ages theme, I want many flags and castles. 
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