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이준규/2024-05-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Are you body conscious or health conscious? I think I'm body conscious. I want to have muscular body like celebrities. Especially, abdominals. Then, I have to work out.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia

I think I'm body conscious.

>> Correct

I want to have muscular body like celebrities.

>> I want to have a muscular body like celebrities.

Especially, abdominals. Then, I have to work out.

>> Correct