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류건우/2024-05-09

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Q: Did you ever dream of having a sister? Why or why not? A: I've never dreamed of having a sister. It's because I'm just comfortable enough now, so I don't really need to think about exchanging or having more siblings. Also, I have a girl among my cousins.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I've never dreamed of having a sister.

>>CORRECT!

2. It's because I'm just comfortable enough now, so I don't really need to think about exchanging or having more siblings.

>>It's because I'm already comfortable enough now, so I don't really need to think about exchanging or having more siblings.

3. Also, I have a girl among my cousins.

>>CORRECT!