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First, I have to take an umbrella because I can avoid the rain. Plus, It is better if I can drink a cup of coffee alone at a cafe.

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Hi, Don!

Thanks for sharing what you usually do when it is raining.

~Casey

First, I have to take an umbrella because I can avoid the rain.

>> First, I have to take an umbrella because I can avoid being wet because of rain.

Plus, It is better if I can drink a cup of coffee alone at a cafe.

>> Plus, it is better if I can drink a cup of coffee alone at a cafe.