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2024.05.07

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HOMEWORK: 2. WHICH COUNTRY WOULD YOU LIKE TO VISIT? I would like to go Kyoto. I want to go there because it is very traditional. I heard that people always go there for delicious food. I hope to go this month .

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ms. Nami! I hope you can go to Kyoto next month. I am sure you will have a great time. Thank you for the great answers. See you!

--Teacher Anji

I would like to go Kyoto.

>> I would like to go to Kyoto.
I want to go there because it is very traditional.

>> CORRECT
I heard that people always go there for delicious food.

>> CORRECT
I hope to go this month.

>> CORRECT