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May 6th's homework

안연희/2024-05-08

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In my room, there are two built-in cabinets. On the other side there is a bed. There is a table in between and that is where i sit when i calling English class. There is a big window facing each other. Next to the door, there is a dressing table. On the floor, there is a fan because the wheather is going hot. On the bed, there're many dolls. Most of them was my favorite character, but i don't like them than before.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Yeon Hee,

Excellent description of your room. Based on your description, it seems like you have a big room. Can't wait for a room tour^^

See you later!

-Teacher Ash

In my room, there are two built-in cabinets.

>> CORRECT

OR >> There are two built-in cabinets in my room.

On the other side there is a bed.

>> On the other side, there is a bed.

There is a table in between and that is where i sit when i calling English class.

>> There is a table in between the bed. That is where I sit when I have my English class.

There is a big window facing each other.

>> There are two big windows facing each other.

Next to the door, there is a dressing table.

>> Next to the door is a dressing a table.

On the floor, there is a fan because the wheather is going hot.

>> On the floor, there is a fan because the weather is getting hot.

On the bed, there're many dolls.

>> On the bed, there are many dolls.

Most of them was my favorite character, but i don't like them than before.

>> Most of them were my favorite characters but i don’t like them anymore.