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How to Good sleep

이창노/2024-05-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hi Ara! Good morning! You baby youngest. May be he is very cute. Umm...but you are so tired. I think you must sleep after lunch. If you sleep 20minutes. You will so very fresh. Thank you See you next time.

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Hello Chang No! Thank you or accomplishing your homework and as well for giving a very good advice. Your original text had some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. These adjustments improve the clarity and flow of your message, ensuring it's easily understood.

^^ T. Ara

You baby youngest.

>>> You have a very young baby.
May be he is very cute.

>>> Maybe he is very cute.
Umm...but you are so tired.

>>> Hmm... but you seem very tired.
I think you must sleep after lunch.

>>> I think you should sleep after lunch.
If you sleep 20minutes. You will so very fresh.

>>> If you sleep for 20 minutes, you will feel very refreshed.