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Describe your favorite fast food restaurant.

박혜연/2024-05-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I’m crazy about chicken and poke. Because chicken is crunch and moist!! And much souses make better delicious it. And then Poke is salad. But this is various ingredients that are savory and clean taste.🤩
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hye Yeon! Sounds delicious! Chicken and poke are both tasty options with different textures and flavors.
~T. Jenna

I’m crazy about chicken and poke. 
Correct, or
>> I'm crazy about any restaurant serving chicken and poke.
Because chicken is crunch and moist!! 
>> This is because chicken is crunchy and moist!
And much souses make better delicious it. 
>>And, many sauces make it even more delicious.
And then Poke is salad. But this is various ingredients that are savory and clean taste.
>>On the other hand, poke is a salad, but it has various ingredients that make it savory and have a clean taste.
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