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What was the last movie you watched at the cinema? What is the movie about? Who's the main actor or

차진혁/2024-05-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The last movie I watched at the cinema is "Wonka". Wonka is a movie about chocolate. Timothee Chalamet is the main actor of the movie. I like Timothee Chalamet in the movie. I think the movie's main scene is Wonka saved peoples in danger and put out bad bosses.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good Tuesday evening, Jimmy!

I'm sending you back your corrected homework. As always, please go over the corrections and alternative expressions, such as "chocolatier". Good night and see you tomorrow!


Cheers,
Jean~~





                       What was the last movie you watched at the cinema? What is the movie about? Who's the main actor or actress?


The last movie I watched at the cinema is "Wonka".
>> The last movie I watched at the cinema was "Wonka".

Wonka is a movie about chocolate.
>> Wonka is a movie about a chocolatier. 

Timothee Chalamet is the main actor of the movie.
>> Timothee Chalamet is the main actor in the movie.

I like Timothee Chalamet in the movie.
>> OR: I became a fan of Timothee Chalamet after watching this movie. 

I think the movie's main scene is Wonka saved peoples in danger and put out bad bosses.
>> I think the movie's climax is when Wonka saves people in danger and puts out bad bosses.

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