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김지숙/2024-05-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like to lie down in my bed and rest after a long day.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Nicely done, Shin Woo! I suggest that you could also construct 2-3 sentences to express your thoughts better.

- Teacher Angela

I like to lie down in my bed and rest after a long day.

>> I like to lie down on my bed and take a rest after a long day.