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박시연/2024-05-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

hello T sharon! This is my homework. I feel gloomy when I hear about that. And I also feel anxious too. Then I'm angry the peolpe that gossip me. But I'm scared when I'm angry with the people, and they think that I am strange. Good night!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Irene!
You impressed me so much with this composition
I applaud the quality of your work.
I think you just need to focus on sentence patterns.
However, your ideas and expressions are truly outstanding.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I feel gloomy when I hear about that.

>> Correct

And I also feel anxious too.

>> I feel anxious, too.

Then I'm angry the peolpe that gossip me.

>> I get angry when people gossip about me.
But I'm scared when I'm angry with the people, and they think that I am strange.

>> However, I feel scared when I'm angry with people and they also think that I am strange.