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How do you avoid forgetting your plans?

김일환/2024-05-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I was younger than now. I could remember everthing. I didn't need to make a note. But now I make a note not to forget my plans. I don't get used to make a note. I made back up plans. I never smoke, One of my high school teacher said, smoking could impair my memory abilities. I excercise every evening. It meants I try to stay young. Because age renders everything useless.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Hwanny!
No wonder you still have a memory of an elephant! I shall do those as well. ^^
~ Trixia

Content:
When I was younger than now. 
- CORRECT.
I could remember everthing. 
I could remember everything. 
I didn't need to make a note. 
- CORRECT.
But now I make a note not to forget my plans. 
- CORRECT.
I don't get used to make a note. 
- I don't get used to making notes. 
I made back up plans. 
- I made backup plans. 
I never smoke, One of my high school teacher said, smoking could impair my memory abilities. 
- I never smoke. One of my high school teachers said smoking could impair my memory abilities. 
I excercise every evening. 
- I exercise every evening. 
It meants I try to stay young.
- It meant I tried to stay young. 
Because age renders everything useless.
- CORRECT.
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