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How do you feel when people say that you look good?

박준현/2024-05-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I feel very good. I feel very good because that people say respectfull. I want respectfull friend. I think there are many respectfull friends very much. These are the reason why I'm happy when that people say look good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

I feel very good.

>> CORRECT!

I feel very good because that people say respectfull.

>> I feel very good because those people are respectful.

I want respectfull friend.

>> I want a respectful friend.

I think there are many respectfull friends very much.

>> I think there are many very respectful friends.

These are the reason why I'm happy when that people say look good.

>> These are the reasons why I'm happy when those people say I look good.