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Have you ever experienced stiffness? If yes, how did you handle it?

박혜연/2024-05-05

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First, i’m going to rest at my room. And then i’m going to do things that i haven’t done before. Because I like to clean up at works that i think i have to do.

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Hi there, Hye Yeon! Your method for handling stiffness seems really effective. Thanks a lot for sharing it!

First, I’m going to rest at my room.

>> First, I'm going to rest in my room.

And then I’m going to do things that i haven’t done before.

>>And then I'm going to do things that I haven't done before.

>>And then I'll try things I've never done yet.

Because I like to clean up at works that i think i have to do.

>>This is because I like to clean up the tasks that I think I have to do.

>> This is because I enjoy tackling the tasks that I believe need to be done.