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Who do you think is the worst superhero? Why?

차진혁/2024-05-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the worst superhero is Thanos in movie" Avengers". I think Thanos is very cool and scared. He tried to destroy the Earth, So I hate him.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello again, Jimmy!

I'm sending you your edited composition. Please check the corrections and alternative expressions, such as "I think or I believe" and the difference between "scared" and "scary". Enjoy your evening there!


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                  Who do you think is the worst superhero? Why?



I think the worst superhero is Thanos in movie" Avengers".
>> I believe the worst superhero is Thanos in the movie “Avengers”.

I think Thanos is very cool and scared.
>> I think Thanos is very cool but scary. 

He tried to destroy the Earth, So I hate him.
>> He tried to destroy Earth so I hate him.

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