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류건우/2024-05-03
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What kind of friendship do you wish to have?
A: I think I don't need anyone else right now for my friend.
I think it's good to have more friends, but even if I can't, it doesn't matter because I don't need them to do more than that.
And I think I'll naturally have more friends by the time goes.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I think it's good to have more friends, but even if I can't, it doesn't matter because I don't need them to do more than that.
3. And I think I'll naturally have more friends by the time goes.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I think I don't need anyone else right now for my friend.
>>I think I don't need anyone else right now for a friend.
2. I think it's good to have more friends, but even if I can't, it doesn't matter because I don't need them to do more than that.
>>I think it's good to have many friends, but not having more doesn't really matter because I don't need them to do more than that.
3. And I think I'll naturally have more friends by the time goes.
>> I think I'll naturally have more friends as the time goes by.
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