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If you could live in any historical period, which one would it be and why

오다솜/2024-05-03

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If you could live in any historical period, which one would it be and why If I could live in any historical period, I would be at Ancient Egypt. And I should be there as a loyal. If I would be there as a commons, I would end up dragging to pyramid construction site. The reason why I'd like to live in there is I'm curious about how ancient people build that huge architecture. and It might sound silly.. I've read some article that suggest there is possibility of the ancient people getting help from alien. so I want to check whether this is true or not.

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Good morning, O Da Som!^^

Living in Ancient Egypt during its pinnacle of civilization would offer a firsthand glimpse into the mysteries of its architecture and culture. While the idea of extraterrestrial assistance is intriguing, experiencing the ingenuity and achievements of ancient civilizations remains a captivating pursuit.

If I could live in any historical period, I would be at Ancient Egypt.

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>> If given the chance, I would choose to live during Ancient Egypt.

And I should be there as a loyal. If I would be there as a commons, I would end up dragging to pyramid construction site.

>> Did you mean: I would want to be there as a loyal subject. If I were there as a commoner, I would likely end up being forced to work on the pyramid construction sites.

The reason why I'd like to live in there is I'm curious about how ancient people build that huge architecture. and It might sound silly..

>> The reason I'd like to live there is because I'm curious about how ancient people built such massive architecture. And, though it might sound silly...

I've read some article that suggest there is possibility of the ancient people getting help from alien. so I want to check whether this is true or not.

>> I've read some articles that suggest the possibility of ancient people receiving help from aliens, so I want to investigate whether this is true or not.