Gemma thank you for your compliment! I'll keep working on essays and trying to be accurate. Have nice weekends!

Hi there Diego~!^^ It's great to know that you're always enthusiastic when completing your writings! Continue to have  a well-developed vocabulary.

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 It is a hard question to answer. 

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Law should be executed in fair condition.

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OR>>> Law should be executed justly.

 However I believe some exceptions for minorities.

>>> However, I believe there are some exceptions for minorities.

 First, minors who is not able to judge their offence, crimes seriously should be warned. 

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They can be educated rather than punished.

>>> They could be educated rather than punished.

 It is hard to regard them as a matured citizen in society. 

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They need to learn how to behave as a loyal citizen who respect individual rights and obligation that society requires. 

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Also it should not be done as a short, single action.

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It should be evaluated several times and supervised continuously.

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 Secondly, however, law should be executed differently by the gravity of offences.

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 Some crimes such as murder, rape, dealing or manufacturing drugs must be punished.

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It is not acceptable for public justice.

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 Heavy crimes are destructive and fatal against social structure. 

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No mercy is allowed. 

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Damage caused by heavy crimes cannot be restored. 

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It must pay price whether criminal's age or situation.

>>> They would pay the bail despite of their age. 

 Criminals should be separated from the society to prevent other crimes.

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 As the law is invention and promises of the society, it contains errors. 

>>>  As the law was made and pledged by the society, it contains errors. 

Law should be changed as time passes.

>>> The law should be changed as time passes by. 

As values and cultures are flowable, law should follow them. 

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The judgement about warning or punishments need to follow social opinions.

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