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What was the most important lesson you have learned in life?

이진태/2024-05-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I have learned a lot of things for my whole life. But, I think the most important value is steadyness. It makes possible many things that we want. If I want something like a pass the exam, I should try steadily.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Thank you for sharing your experience about an important lesson you learned. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I have learned a lot of things for my whole life. But, I think the most important value is steadyness.
>> I have learned many things throughout my life, but I believe that the most crucial value is steadiness. 

It makes possible many things that we want.
>> It enables us to achieve many of our desires.

If I want something like a pass the exam, I should try steadily.
>>  For instance, if I aim to pass an exam, I must maintain a steady effort.
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