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What challenges did you face this year and how did you overcome them?

이진태/2024-05-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I faced some challenges this year. for example, I prepared some job interviews to go new company. I'm working at current company, so it was hard to prepare job interview at the same time. Anyway, I finally got a new job.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey JT! Thank you for sharing about challenges you have faced this year and how you overcame it.

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I faced some challenges this year.

>> CORRECT

for example, I prepared some job interviews to go new company.

>> For instance, I prepared for job interviews to join a new company.

I'm working at current company, so it was hard to prepare job interview at the same time.

>> Balancing both responsibilities was challenging, while still working at my current one.

Anyway, I finally got a new job.

>> CORRECT