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임성준/2024-05-01

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1. What do you need to prepare for? >>> I need to prepare for street fight skill to save someone precious. I want to learn Muay Thai. Muay Thai is the martial arts which is specialized for streed fight. In 2019, I had learned Muay Thai during a month. I wanted to learn more but I was busy at that time. So I'm gonna register the Muay Thai class when I'm free 2. How do you feel when you think you are not prepared for something? >>> I might feel so nervous. Because I'm not deligent, I often don't prepare for something. And I concentrate to accomplish it like cramming. This pattern now permeates my identity.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Brian! It sounds like you're committed to learning Muay Thai for street fighting. Hope you'll have the time soon for it. Keep up the determination! ^^
~ Teacher Maxine

I need to prepare for street fight skill to save someone precious. 
>> I need to prepare for street fighting skills to protect someone precious to me. 

I want to learn Muay Thai. Muay Thai is the martial arts which is specialized for streed fight. 
>> I want to learn Muay Thai, as it's specialized for street fights. 

In 2019, I had learned Muay Thai during a month. I wanted to learn more but I was busy at that time. 
>> In 2019, I trained in Muay Thai for a month, but I couldn't continue due to being busy. 

So I'm gonna register the Muay Thai class when I'm free
>> However, I plan to register for Muay Thai classes when I have more free time.

I might feel so nervous. Because I'm not deligent, I often don't prepare for something. 
>> I sometimes feel nervous about this because I'm not diligent and often don't prepare well.

And I concentrate to accomplish it like cramming. This pattern now permeates my identity.
>> I tend to cram things at the last minute, which has become a pattern in my life.

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