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Are you scared zombies?

이창노/2024-04-30

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Umm.... Actually i don't see to zombies. I watched to zombies from movie, Drama etc. When I watching to zombies movies, I was surprised because zombies pop out suddenly. So, I many surprised and my feel is nervous. Ah, Do you know Korea famous zombie movie is Busanheng? This movie apper many zombies. And this movie have been moved than general zombie movie. So, I recommend watch to this movie.
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Hi Matthew!^^ 

My husband is a zombie enthusiast. 
He believes that a time will come that zombies would actually invade the world.. haha 
For me though, I don't really watching zombie movies. 
They seem creepy and dirty. 

Andrea 

Umm....
Actually i don't see to zombies.
>> Umm, I actually do not watch anything about zombies. 

I watched to zombies from movie, Drama etc.
>> I watched zombies from a drama movie.

When I watching to zombies movies, I was surprised because zombies pop out suddenly.
>> When I watch zombie movies, I get a jumpscare because zombies will just appear. 

So, I many surprised and my feel is nervous.
>> I am always surprised so I feel nervous. 

Ah, Do you know Korea famous zombie movie is Busanheng?
>> Do you know the famous Korean movie, " Train to Busan' ? 

This movie apper many zombies.
>> There are many zombies that appeared in this movie. 

And this movie have been moved than general zombie movie.
>> And this movie exceeded common zombies. 

So, I recommend watch to this movie.
>> So I recommend you to watch this movie. 
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