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박혜연/2024-04-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think the best magic performer is hyun woo Choi. Because he is famous in Korea. And he is well at psychological warfare around the public.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hye Yeon! I believe that Hyun Woo Choi's fame and skill in psychological warfare make him a standout performer. Great choice!

~T. Jenna

I think the best magic performer is hyun woo Choi.

>>I think the best magic performer is Hyun Woo Choi.

OR
>>I believe that Hyun Woo Choi stands out as the ultimate magician.

Because he is famous in Korea.

>>This is because he is famous un Korea.

>> This is due to the fact that he is renowned on Korea.

And he is well at psychological warfare around the public.

>>And, he is skilled at psychological warfare among the public.

>>Moreover, he possesses expertise in manipulating public perceptions and emotions through psychological tactics.