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Do you think that one day there will be just one language in the world? Would the world be a better
박소은/2024-04-29
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Mabye.
It's becasue there are lots of countres so it will be hard to be good place but mabye it can be better place.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
It would have been better if you expounded on the topic.
You could have been more responsive to the question.
Let's review and discuss in class. ^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Mabye.
>> It can happen.
It's becasue there are lots of countres so it will be hard to be good place but mabye it can be better place.
It's becasue there are lots of countres so it will be hard to be good place but mabye it can be better place.
>> It's because there are lots of countries so it will be hard to make it a good place but maybe it can be a better place.
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