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Would you like to visit Pyramid or a Giza of Egypt?

박준현/2024-04-29

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Yes I want to visit Pyramid. I want to visit Pyramid because I want to see many ruins. And I want to look the Spingcs. Do you want to visit Pyramid or a Giza of Egypt? These are the reason why I want to visit Pyramid or a Giza of Egypt.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

Yes I want to visit Pyramid.

>> Yes I want to visit the Pyramid.

I want to visit Pyramid because I want to see many ruins.

>> I want to visit the Pyramid because I want to see many ruins.

And I want to look the Spingcs.

>> I also want to see the Sphynx.

Do you want to visit Pyramid or a Giza of Egypt?

>> Do you want to visit the Pyramid of Giza in Egypt?

These are the reason why I want to visit Pyramid or a Giza of Egypt.

>> These are the reasons why I want to visit the Pyramid of Giza in Egypt.