Hi Yoon Hee,

Thanks for sharing a detailed narrative of your time with your family. I think it would be really awesome for you to visit again in summer. Speak to you later! ^^

- Teacher Ash

The resort where my family visited was opened last year so, everything was new.

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 It's a huge place because they have three big buildings.

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 Our purpose was having dinner at restaurant and go to the water park.

>>Our plan was to have dinner and go to the waterpark.

 We waited 2 hours while looking around the restaurant until open. 

>> We waited for two hours, while looking around the restaurant, until the waterpark opens. 

They have many kinds of food especially eastern Asia.

>> They have many kinds of food especially East Asian. 

 What i ate first was Sushi of Japanese part and next part was grilled part. 

>> I ate Japanese sushi, then I also tasted the grilled one. 

There are beef,lamb,pork and chicken so, i treid everything in small amounts.

>>They also have beef, lamb, pork and chicken so, I tried everything in small amount.

 At that time, i already fulled.

>> At that time, I was already full. 

 But i found my favorite food Malatang of Chinese part so, i had to tried it.

>> However, I found my favorite food, Malatang, a Chinese food. So, I had to try it. 

 Finally i ate that and i thought should swim and digest it. 

>> After finally eating all that, I thought I should swim to help digest all I’ve eaten.

So we went straight to water park.

>> So, we went straight to the waterpark. 

 I was really looking forward to water slides but it wasn't opened yet.

>> I was really looking forward to the water slides, but it was not yet opened. 

 There's only a lazy pool what we could enjoy.

>> There’s only the lazy pool that we could enjoy. 

 We enterd the lazy pool with a tube provided at resort.

>> We tried the lazy pool with lifesavers or floaties given to us by the staff. 

 And swam without a break for 2 hours to digest.

>> We swam to hours without a break which helped digest what we have eaten. 

 I thought we enjoyed 100% of resort.

>> I definitely,100%, enjoyed the resort experience.  

 I want to go again.

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