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How do you want your future to be?

박혜연/2024-04-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want to be rich. And what I want most is to be happy with my family, my lover, and my friends.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hye Yeon! It's wonderful to have aspirations for both wealth and happiness with loved ones. Finding that balance is key to a fulfilling life.
~T. Jenna

I want to be rich. 
Correct, or
>>I dream to be wealthy.
And what I want most is to be happy with my family, my lover, and my friends.
Correct, or
>> I value nothing more than finding joy and contentment alongside my family, my beloved partner, and cherished friends.
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