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Have you ever taken part in a singing competition?

김병욱/2024-04-29

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No, i have never taken part in a singing competition. When i was young about 8 to 11 years. I was a member of the Goyang City Boys and Girls Choir. I went choir room every Saturday, it's very fantastic experience. I was the alto part leader. because my voice is very loud. We attended many performances. we participated in several competitions, but did not win any awards.
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Good day, Dan!
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No, I have never taken part in a singing competition.
>>>  CORRECT!

When I was young about 8 to 11 years.
>>>  CORRECT!

I was a member of the Goyang City Boys and Girls Choir.
>>>  CORRECT!

I went choir room every Saturday, it's very fantastic experience.
>>> I went to choir practice every Saturday, it's a really fantastic experience.

I was the alto part leader. because my voice is very loud.
>>>  CORRECT!

We attended many performances. we participated in several competitions but did not win any awards.
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