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Have you taken any risks recently?

김일환/2024-04-28

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I am planning to move house. A house I want to buy is more expensive than my house. I should borrow money from a bank, and I am going to pay back the money for 30 years. It's my first time to borrow big money from the bank. I am little bit worry about it. Many korean buy houses for investment purposes. I am not the person. I want to move to the new house because my house is so cold in winter.

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I am planning to move house.

- I am planning to move houses.

A house I want to buy is more expensive than my house.

- CORRECT.

I should borrow money from a bank, and I am going to pay back the money for 30 years.

- CORRECT.

>>> - I should borrow money from a bank, and I am going to return it for 30 years.

It's my first time to borrow big money from the bank.

- It's my first time borrowing a large sum of money from the bank.

I am little bit worry about it.

- I am a little bit worried about it.

Many korean buy houses for investment purposes.

- Many Koreans buy houses for investment purposes.

I am not the person.

- CORRECT.

>>> I am not like that.

I want to move to the new house because my house is so cold in winter.

- I want to move to the new house because my house is freezing in the winter.