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윤영선/2024-04-27

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The best 3 cities I want to live in Korea. Best 1 - Jeju Seogwipo City You can go sea fishing seasonally, and there are many pretty pub cafes. It is also a place where travelers' freedom is overflowing. Best 2 - Yeosu City Yeosu City, where camellia blooms and has a camellia island, is a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live. Best 3 - Gangneung City Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains and seas nearby. Among the cities of Gangwon Province, the infrastructure is well developed. "It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo and Gyeongpo.

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Thank you for sharing these cities, Mia. Very good! You have described them well.
-Khai
The best 3 cities I want to live in Korea.
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>> Here are the three (3) best cities that I want to live in South Korea.
Best 1 - Jeju Seogwipo City
>> 1. Jeju Seogwipo City
You can go sea fishing seasonally, and there are many pretty pub cafes.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> You can go sea fishing seasonally. There are also many aesthetic pub cafes.
It is also a place where travelers' freedom is overflowing.
>> CORRECT
Best 2 - Yeosu City
>> 2. Yeosu City
Yeosu City, where camellia blooms and has a camellia island, is a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live.
>> Yeosu City is the city where camellia blooms. It has a camellia island. It is also a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live.
Best 3 - Gangneung City
>> 3. Gangneung City
Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains and seas nearby.
>> Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains, and seas nearby.
Among the cities of Gangwon Province, the infrastructure is well developed.
>> CORRECT
"It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo and Gyeongpo.
>> It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo, and Gyeongpo.