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류건우/2024-04-26
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What genre do you prefer reading when it comes to books?
A: I like to read the novels with dark mood.
I like novels because it's similar to reality, but since it's not a real thing, it can be more interesting.
And I like the bright mood too, but I prefer the dark mood.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I like novels because it's similar to reality, but since it's not a real thing, it can be more interesting.
3. And I like the bright mood too, but I prefer the dark mood.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things for consideration:
1. I like to read the novels with dark mood.
>>I like to read novels with a dark mood.
2. I like novels because it's similar to reality, but since it's not a real thing, it can be more interesting.
>>CORRECT!
3. And I like the bright mood too, but I prefer the dark mood.
>>I like the bright mood too, but I still prefer the dark mood.
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