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What part of the concert will bring you disappointed?

김병욱/2024-04-26

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When i went concert to the first time, there's around mood is so good, but i can see the uncomfortable seat. Even if concert time too long about over the two hours. i don't understand this situation.
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Hi Dan!
Thank you for submitting your homework. As you can see, I made some suggestions to improve your English and make it sound better. Keep learning and practicing :)
T. Aki~

When i went concert to the first time, there's around mood is so good, but i can see the uncomfortable seat.
>>> The first time I went to a concert, there was a good mood but I couldn't see any comfortable seats.
>>> I was in a good mood the first time I went to a concert though we were in an uncomfortable area

Even if concert time too long about over the two hours. i don't understand this situation.
>>>  And the concert lasted over two hours. I don't understand this situation.
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