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For you, who is Korea's best president? Why?

차진혁/2024-04-25

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I think Korea's best president is Moon jaein. I think Moon jaein is very friendly. And I like his message "people is first"
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening there, Jimmy!

I'm sending you your corrected composition and many thanks again for uploading it. 
As always, take note of the corrections, such as capitalization of names. See you tomorrow and good night! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                  For you, who is Korea's best president? Why?



I think Korea's best president is Moon jaein.
>> I think Korea's best president is Moon Jaein.
>> OR: I believe the best president in Korea is Moon Jaein. 

I think Moon jaein is very friendly.
>> I think Moon Jaein is very friendly.
>> OR: Moon Jaein looks very friendly.

And I like his message "people is first"
>> And I like his message, "People are first."

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