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류건우/2024-04-25
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: Do you prefer having 4 or just 2 seasons (sunny and rainy)? Why?
A: I prefer 4 seasons.
I don't actually like the hot weather like summer or cold weather like winter, but I like the warm season like spring or autumn.
But for 2 seasons, it's usually hot, and I don't like hot weather.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I don't actually like the hot weather like summer or cold weather like winter, but I like the warm season like spring or autumn.
3. But for 2 seasons, it's usually hot, and I don't like hot weather.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to consider:
1. I prefer 4 seasons.
>>CORRECT!
2. I don't actually like the hot weather like summer or cold weather like winter, but I like the warm season like spring or autumn.
>>I don't actually like the hot summer weather or the cold winter weather, but I like warm season like spring or autumn.
3. But for 2 seasons, it's usually hot, and I don't like hot weather.
>>However, for 2 seasons, it's usually hot, and I don't like hot weather.
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