Thank you for your kind advice about positive thoughts in life!

Hi DIEGO!^^ Once again, I appreciate your diligence! I'm hoping you'll keep writing and comprehend the assignment. Keep going! Keep developing!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families.
 What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?

 Nowadays people leave their hometown and families.

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 There are some specific reasons by personnel and structural issues.

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 First, by the Industrial Revolution, people moved into city for jobs.

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As statics show, the number of jobs are different. 

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While rural area's main job is related with primary industries, city's job is diverse. 

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Also, the wage is even higher than rural area.

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This imbalance becomes worse as time passes. 

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 Second, the social value has been changed.

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In the past, familism was main value, however, nowadays individualism took the place.

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People think that marriage is not a mandatory factor in life. 

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One person household ratio surpassed four person household ratio
several years ago. 

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This phenomenon happens in not only young generation but also senior generation.

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 Here are some effects of leaving families.

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 First, people become more and more individualistic. 

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They don't feel any pressure to join in communities which they don't like.

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So the interests of individual become diverse and many kinds of culture can be produced. 

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People will not distinguish themselves by ages but their interests, such as motorcycle riders group includes various generations. 

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Second, in family, parents generation would not expect their old age 'looking after' from their children.

>>> Secondly, parents of today would not expect their children to "take care of" them in their later years.

Nowadays seniors are living together in a silver town which includes medical system, educational programs and etc. 

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Parents will also decrease the amount of financial support to their children or won't have child. 

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