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What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?

오서현/2024-04-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It is the positive things are get a hobby. It have organize your thoughts. And negative things are become lethargic. It doesn’t have any energy and power
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Thank you for this Seo Hyeon!

It is the positive things are get a hobby. 
>>> The positive thing is to get a hobby. 
It have organize your thoughts. 
>>> It can organize your thoughts. 
And negative things are become lethargic. 
>>>  On the other hand, the negative ones are those that make you lethargic.
It doesn’t have any energy and power
>>> It doesn’t give you any energy and power.
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