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The risks of not taking risks

양기연/2024-04-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When we start doing something and try to achieve something great, we cannot help facing some challenges or taking risks. If someone don't confront and deal with the risks, he or she can't survive in the field.

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Hi, Gi Yean!

Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! We can only see results if we do something about it.

- T. Caitlyn

When we start doing something and try to achieve something great, we cannot help facing some challenges or taking risks.

>> CORRECT

If someone don't confront and deal with the risks, he or she can't survive in the field.

>> If someone doesn't confront and deal with the risks, he or she can't survive in the field.