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What advice can you give a friend who is suffering from chronic stress?

박혜연/2024-04-25

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I will suggest her or him to rest. And i say, “i have delicious foods. Eat the foods with me.” So i will listen talking her or him. I just want to do healing for my friend who has stress.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey, Hye Yeon! Encouraging rest and offering comfort through food is such a caring gesture. Your friendS are lucky to have you.

~T. Jenna

I will suggest her or him to rest.

Correct, or

>>I will recommend that she or he takes some rest.

>>If a friend is really stressed all the time, I'd say he or she should try to rest more.

And i say, “i have delicious foods. Eat the foods with me.”

>>And I will say, 'I have delicious food. Eat the food with me'.

>>And I'd tell him or her, "Hey, I've got some tasty/delectable food. Let's eat together."

So i will listen talking her or him.

>>While eating together, I will talk and listen to him or her.

I just want to do healing for my friend who has stress.

>>I just want to help my friend who is stressed by offering some healing.