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How good are you at playing sports?

박성진/2024-04-24

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When I was young, I was good at various sports within my age. Because I growth faster than others. But after middleschool, my sports capacity is about average.

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Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia

When I was young, I was good at various sports within my age.

>> Correct

OR >> When I was young, I was good at various sports within my age range.

Because I growth faster than others.

>> Because I grow faster than others.

But after middleschool, my sports capacity is about average.

>> But after middle school, my sports capacity was about average.