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Do you think you have a healthy eating habit?

권복희/2024-04-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think I have both healthy and bad eating habit. Eating lots of vegetable and fruit is good one, having much sweet food is bad one. Depending on cafein for awaking is also my bad eating habit.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Ms. Jade!

I think I have both healthy and bad eating habits.

>>> correct
Eating lots of vegetable and fruit is good one, having much sweet food is bad one.

>>> Eating lots of vegetables and fruits is the good one, having too much sweet food is the bad one.

Depending on cafein for awaking is also my bad eating habit.

>>> Depending on caffeine to be awake is also my bad eating habit.