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윤영선/2024-04-24

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The first thing I consider when purchasing an item is whether I really need it. Also, the importance of the item depends on what you want to buy. For example, when buying a car, consider it in the order of brand, performance, and price. This is because the price varies depending on the brand. Also, when buying clothes, price and quality come first. If you can buy good quality clothes at a cheaper price, your satisfaction will increase. I don't prefer high-end brands. There are expectations that high-end brand products will be better than mid- to low-end brands, but there seems to be little difference in the original value of the product.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for sharing your preferences when you buy items. Job well done, Mia. ^^

-Khai

The first thing I consider when purchasing an item is whether I really need it.
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>> Whenever I buy an item, I think first if I need it.
Also, the importance of the item depends on what you want to buy.
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>> In addition, the need for the item affects what you will buy.
For example, when buying a car, consider it in the order of brand, performance, and price.
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>> For example, a person must consider the brand, performance, and price when buying a car.
This is because the price varies depending on the brand.
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>> Depending on the brand, the price will vary.
Also, when buying clothes, price and quality come first.
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>> When it comes to clothes, the price and quality must come first.
If you can buy good quality clothes at a cheaper price, your satisfaction will increase.
>> Buying affordable and good quality clothes will make you feel more satisfied.
I don't prefer high-end brands.
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There are expectations that high-end brand products will be better than mid- to low-end brands, but there seems to be little difference in the original value of the product.
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>> People will think that high-end brands are better than mid to low-end brands, but there’s not much of a difference in quality.