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Would you like to visit Sahara desert?

박준현/2024-04-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, I don't want to visit Sahara desert. I don't want to visit Sahara desert because it's very hot. If I will go to the Sahara desert, I think I will melt. And do you want to go to the Sahara desert? These are the reason why I don't want to visit to that hot and large desert.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


No, I don't want to visit Sahara desert.
>> No, I don't want to visit the Sahara desert.
I don't want to visit the Sahara desert because it's very hot.
>> CORRECT!
If I will go to the Sahara desert, I think I will melt.
>> CORRECT!
And do you want to go to the Sahara desert?
>> CORRECT!
These are the reason why I don't want to visit to that hot and large desert.
>> These are the reasons why I don't want to visit that hot and large desert.
OR >> These are the reasons why I don't want to visit that large hot desert.

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