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김도연/2024-04-23

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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about "Do you want to change your status in life? why or why not? ” Yes, I want to change my status. I want to be born as rich as possible. My parents aren't bad people, but I don't think it would be a bad idea to be born the daughter of a richer person.
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Hi, Jessica!

Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
Please continue writing your homework for faster improvements. :) 

YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! 

-T.NIKKI ^^ 


Yes, I want to change my status. 
>> Yes, I want to change my status in life.


I want to be born as rich as possible. 
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I want to be born rich as much as possible.


My parents aren't bad people, but I don't think it would be a bad idea to be born the daughter of a richer person.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My parents aren't bad people, but I think it would be a good idea to be born the daughter of a rich family.

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