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How do you keep your body clean and healthy?

차유진/2024-04-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I take a shower and wash hair daily. I brush my teeth cleanly. I exercise everyday and when fine dust is no good I wear a mask.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Yale!

I'm sending you your corrected composition. Please pay attention to the corrections and alternative sentences used. 
Enjoy the rest of your night! See you tomorrow! 



Cheers,
Jean~~


       
                          How do you keep your body clean and healthy?



I take a shower and wash hair daily.
>> I take a shower and wash my hair daily.

I brush my teeth cleanly.
>> OR: I brush my teeth well. 

I exercise everyday and when fine dust is no good I wear a mask.
>> I exercise every day and when there's fine dust, I wear a mask.
>> [ NOTE: The word "every day" in the sentence above is two words because this word is used as an adverb, not adjective in which case, it would be one word - "everyday". ]
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