POWER ENGLISH

현재위치

> 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

박혜연/2024-04-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If my favorite person had suffered from the fear, i wouldn’t have gone near it. And i would have said, “Don’t worry, i’m always here with you

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey, Hye Yeon! Thanks a bunch for sparing some time to do your homework. Please check the points for improvement below.

If my favorite person had suffered from the fear, i wouldn’t have gone near it.

>>If my favorite person is suffering from fear, I would advise him or her not to go near whatever makes him or her afraid.

And i would have said, “Don’t worry, i’m always here with you.

>>And I would say, 'Don’t worry, I’m always here with you.'