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Do you like looking at the moon?

이창노/2024-04-23

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Umm..... I almost stay home or company. Especially I'm going to my home since a night of the moon. So, looking at the sky is not easy. But, sometimes I look at the sky and I wish to sky or moon. Korea exist wish to moon day. All Korean wish to moon that family comfort, lotto, get a promotion or success etc. I wish for family healthy and become lotto. But not yet become lotto..... So I watch for opportunity :) Whenever I believe become lotto!!

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Hi Matthew!^^

The moon is indeed mesmerizing.

Our house has a very good view of the moon.

I often not check it but there are times that it's just to bright and I can't help but to stare at it.

Andrea

I almost stay home or company.

>> I almost stay at home or at the company.

Especially I'm going to my home since a night of the moon.

>> I usually go home at night where the moon is.

So, looking at the sky is not easy.

>> Correct

But, sometimes I look at the sky and I wish to sky or moon.

>> But, sometimes I look at the night sky and I make a wish to the night sky or the moon.

Korea exist wish to moon day.

>> I wish for for the moon to exist in Korea on a day

All Korean wish to moon that family comfort, lotto, get a promotion or success etc.

>> All Koreans wish to the moon for family comfort, win the lottery, get a promotion or success etc.

I wish for family healthy and become lotto.

>> I wish for my family's healthy and win the lottery too.

But not yet become lotto...

>> But winning the lottery is still unachieved.

So I watch for opportunity :)

>> So I watch out for that opportunity. :)

Whenever I believe become lotto!!

>> Whenever I believe, I can be a lottery winner!