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What cuisine will you never try?

김병욱/2024-04-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want to all type of cuisine because i love eating-time. But some of food like CHO-TOUFU i hate them. because i have very sensitive nose.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Dan!
Eating is the most luxurious activity that we need to spend on. Your time and your feelings. You don't need expensive food to enjoy a meal, however, you need a great time and enjoyment to be satisfied.
Aki~


I want to all type of cuisine because i love eating-time.
>>> I want all kinds of cuisine because I love my eating time.
>>>  I want all kinds of cuisine because I love eating.

But some of food like CHO-TOUFU i hate them. because i have very sensitive nose.
>>> But I hate some foods like CHO-TOUFU because I have a very sensitive nose.

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